Place and Time Response

The two papers I read was Dante's and David.

Dante's story, in my opinion, was great. I loved how he structured it was. It was in so much detail I could picture myself being in that place with him. I loved the dialogue and his vignettes was humorous. A little bit of grammar problems but other than that, I loved his essay. He wasn't sure if he should add one more story or just write the conclusion, I suggested to write another story because the way he ended it was like a cliff hanger and I am not a fan of cliff hanger, LOL. Also, he was at about 1000 words and I didn't want to lose points because of a short word count.

David's paper was definitely a personal essay. I was not a big fan of it, I seemed to be more of a research paper than a personal essay. It didn't interest me in reading it further. He has a lot of work to get done on it. I advise that he should be more descriptive about his place so I can feel like I'm there. His place is worth writing a paper on, I'm interested but, I just need a lot more from it.